Magic made

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by ThaCake (Not the best, just better than you.) on Thursday, 07-Apr-2011 10:45:06

Listening to your soft breathing.
Twilight dancing on golden brown skin.
Lover's precious passion.
Our bitter sweet sin.

The moon soars high.
The stars sing you to slumber.
Your eyes slip closed.
And my mind begins to wonder.

If I was homeless
and hungry.
I wouldn't notice
As long as your holding me.
If the sun stopped shining.
Behind the clouds hiding.
I wouldn't notice.
As long as your holding me.

When we fell in love.
I heard an angel cry.
Her hand caressed my soul.
and her spirit told me why.
A joy she never felt.
A brighter fire never flamed.
Our souls completed by the other.
Our heart's rhythm the same.

If I was worried and lonely.
And my friends didn't know me.
I wouldn't notice.
As long as your holding me.
If there was no hope.
No way for people to cope.
I wouldn't notice.
As long as your holding me.

Bird song sounds like heaven.
Sunshine is pure bliss.
A dragon fly is born when we touch.
And a star falls every time we kiss.

The world feels no pain.
I have all to gain.
The angels sing.
A butterfly gets its wings.
I have everything.
When your holding me.

Post 2 by the charismatic_enigma (Zone BBS Addict) on Thursday, 07-Apr-2011 13:25:52

i've already told you what i think of this poem, its beautyful, and amazingly written, every word has its place along side every other word.

Post 3 by AgateRain (Believe it or not, everything on me and about me is real!) on Thursday, 07-Apr-2011 19:40:13

aw, kayla it's pretty

Post 4 by squidwardqtentacles (I just keep on posting!) on Saturday, 09-Apr-2011 20:45:26

It reminds me of the "Footprints in the Sand" story. When the writer felt abandonned by God, he got the answer that God was there all along, the one set of "footprints in the sand" belonged to God carrying the person thru his or her distress.